1:28:23I don’t think there’s an overarching story anymore
1:28:24I have a diagram if you want me to post it in the discord
1:28:24You dont follow along you just go with the flow
1:28:25no im completely lost at this point
1:28:25Willow died and came back without reason??????
1:28:25story? i thought this was just slice of life
1:28:26i kinda lost it around chapter 9
1:28:26the author is not following the story
1:28:27early on, there was. now we're rambling
1:28:27The story stopped making the slight but of sense a while back
1:28:27there was a plot for like three chapters
1:28:28what are you, some kind of poser prep????
1:28:30yeah?!!??! Voldamort is trying to get Draco and Dumbledore is a poser now
1:28:30the only solid shit was draco dick
1:28:38you gotta admit they got delivery though
1:28:39story is more of a suggestion at this point
1:28:41Chapter 17 seemed to be a redo of chapter 16, because tara made up with raven and so had to rewrite Willow back into the story.