3:11:10The Ship part kinda dragged on for a bit yh
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3:11:121967 has overstayed. Especially with that maze. I get the message but yeah it overstayed
3:11:12I was for sure the old man was cooked
3:11:13Yeah, makes sense :_shioriHeadpat:
3:11:13You were on a timer trying to bring everything with you...
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3:11:15Very understandable criticizm
3:11:15It was very interesting. A writer's game. Not really game-smart, but the story was good.
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3:11:16You were stressed out :grinning_squinting_face:.
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3:11:2067 makes sense the way it is, but overall the communist era ones were weaker
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3:11:27Where was his sense of urgency :_shioriMelt:
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3:11:30I'm glad that they gave them good endings
3:11:30I think the maze should represent Toni revising the story
3:11:32Im glad it ended well at least
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3:11:34the flashbacks were a little forcefull yea
3:11:36We did have an idea he was a cinephile